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April 30, 2004, 17:12
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hallo en...ini gua ...lagi...semoga gua ngga ganggu elo..
'Ting tong'
"Yaaaaaaa, tunggu..!"
Pintu terbuka.
"Masuk deh Char, gua pake sepatu dulu."
Charlie duduk dengan santai di ruang tamu, membaca koran basi yang tergeletak di meja.
"Mau makan dimana hari ini En?"
"Terserah."
gua susah banget hubungin elo akhir2 ini, sibuk banget ya?
"Ngomong-ngomong, rumus dari 322-nya udah hafal?"
"Belon, sama sekali ngga masuk otak."
gua ngga ngerti pembicaraan kita yang terakhir
"Udah ah, jangan ngomong pelajaran lagi."
"Ok, ok..jadi, mau makan dimana?"
"Hmmm tetep ngga tau, abis rasanya udah semua. Jadi bingung."
kenapa ngga jawab jelas pertanyaan gua?
Charlie menatap jendela, di luar sudah lumayan gelap. Jam 6 sore...
"Udaranya hari ini dingin banget."
"Iya, payah..pake acara mendung lagi tadi."
kabar yang gua denger waktu itu ngga bener kan?
"Eh, gimana kalo kita ke cafe itu, mau? Kan sekarang udah setaon. Sekalian rayain dikitlah."
"Males, di situ rame banget."
En, permintaan gua masih sama
"Waduh, kemana dong? O iyah.. udah lama ngga ke restoran yang di deket Main Rd. mau ngga?"
"Boleh deh."
gua minta lo selalu jujur sama gua, no matter what
"Udah ngga ada yang ketinggalan kan?" Charlie membuka pintu depan, udara dingin berhembus.
"Eh, tunggu tunggu..."
dan ingat satu hal
"Kenapa?"
"Hp gua ketinggalan di kamar." En berlari sambil merogoh kunci kamar dari dalam tasnya.
gua percaya sama elo, selalu...
-end-
"Hmmm ada voice mail."
"Dari siapa?"
"Ngga tau, ntar aja lah dengerinnya. yok jalan."
-ooOoo-
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April 30, 2004, 17:13
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udah, kelar...totally short story...
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May 01, 2004, 07:25
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wah..asli , gw ga ngerti..ada apa gerangan??hehe
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Cause I've seen rainbows that can take your breath away | The beauty of the setting sun on any given day | When it comes to shooting stars I have seen a few | But I've never seen anything as beautiful as you 
there's always another day, another way, another pray, another chance, another glance, another cry, another try, another laugh, another tear, another fear, another smile, another mile, but there's never another YOU!!!!
it's where the stars line up. it's when the oceans touch. it's in a place you've never been that feels like home. it's in the air right now. it's when you give your all and give a little more. i've never been so sure, that's where you find love
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May 01, 2004, 08:35
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kalo lo baca yang di italics dengan yang tulisan normal dipisahin, seharusnya seh lo ngerti...ini cerita di dua tempat yang berbeda 
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May 01, 2004, 08:38
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o..gitu toh...ngerti2 deh..
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Cause I've seen rainbows that can take your breath away | The beauty of the setting sun on any given day | When it comes to shooting stars I have seen a few | But I've never seen anything as beautiful as you
there's always another day, another way, another pray, another chance, another glance, another cry, another try, another laugh, another tear, another fear, another smile, another mile, but there's never another YOU!!!!
it's where the stars line up. it's when the oceans touch. it's in a place you've never been that feels like home. it's in the air right now. it's when you give your all and give a little more. i've never been so sure, that's where you find love
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May 01, 2004, 09:01
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selingkuh yah hehehe
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May 01, 2004, 09:01
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selingkuh itu indah buat selingan hehehe JK dunkz
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May 01, 2004, 15:02
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gak ngarti 
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saya sudah DEWASA HEHEHE
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May 01, 2004, 17:02
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*GUBRAK!* 
gua paling males bikin deskripsi panjang2 sih  <gak bisa bikin descriptive story> jadi makanya banyak yg ngga ngerti
lonely_girl : lo coba aja baca yang italics dulu semuanya....trus baca yang ditulis biasa semua...itu kejadian di dua tempat berbeda
kalo ngerti, intinya sebenernya simple banget  cuma nyeritain satu waktu doang...
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May 01, 2004, 17:08
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Quote:
Originally posted by natasia
o..gitu toh...ngerti2 deh..
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ngerti khan
luv^_^luv : 
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May 02, 2004, 14:38
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si En En selingkuh ma Charlie?   kasihan ya ...
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May 03, 2004, 15:41
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welah aku malah ngertinya nih yang kirim sms tuh charlie
tapi abis baca komen my jd mikir juga jgn jgn mang selingkuh?
haha ga ngerti nih sorry
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May 03, 2004, 17:08
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a little bit complicated...hehehe
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Cause I've seen rainbows that can take your breath away | The beauty of the setting sun on any given day | When it comes to shooting stars I have seen a few | But I've never seen anything as beautiful as you
there's always another day, another way, another pray, another chance, another glance, another cry, another try, another laugh, another tear, another fear, another smile, another mile, but there's never another YOU!!!!
it's where the stars line up. it's when the oceans touch. it's in a place you've never been that feels like home. it's in the air right now. it's when you give your all and give a little more. i've never been so sure, that's where you find love
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May 04, 2004, 00:57
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Keren ceritanya
gw suka banget
singkat tp dalem banget...
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May 04, 2004, 03:01
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waduh cancerio orangnya top pisan ngerti semuanya
waduh butuh belajar lagi nih heheh
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If You are alone, I'll be your Shadow
If You want , I'll be your Shoulder
If You want a Hug, I'll be your Pillow
If You need to be Happy, I'll be your Smile.
But anytime you need a friend, It'll just be me
I want you to know that I cherish every minute of the time I spent with you
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