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lonely_girl
October 02, 2003, 23:43
gw mao mosting cerpen gw di sini nich :hehe
tapi gw takut klo gak ada yg baca gimana ? :(
tolong kaseh saran and kritik yach . plZ ::bahagia:
shella
October 03, 2003, 00:48
coba aja dulu dibikin.... masa sih gak ada yg baca :)
lonely_girl
October 03, 2003, 01:18
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lonely_girl
October 03, 2003, 01:19
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lonely_girl
October 03, 2003, 01:20
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lonely_girl
October 03, 2003, 01:20
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thing``
October 03, 2003, 02:00
::cry:: why does love so cruell... hizk :nangis:
ra1ny
October 03, 2003, 10:54
lanjut donk...bagus kok...brengsek tuh co kaya jimmyyy...mendingan di gampar
Ma®™
October 03, 2003, 13:46
Ho oH bagus kQ cmen di jarakkin aja biar yg baca ga pusinQ :haha Tiap cerpen gua commentnya sama molo
Lady Synthesizer
October 03, 2003, 14:34
iyah bener, jarak neh.. :D
lonely_girl
October 03, 2003, 19:06
ceritanya bagus gak ? :bingung:
kaseh kritik PlZ :angel:
lonely_girl
October 03, 2003, 19:08
Originally posted by Lady Synthesizer
iyah bener, jarak neh.. :D
iya dech ntar :hehe
lonely_girl
October 03, 2003, 19:09
thanks buat thing , rainy , mareah , lady yg udah baca cerpen gw ::bahagia:
DWibowo1.
October 03, 2003, 20:05
Yah tanggung Mel..... lanjutin donk..... :D
risca
October 03, 2003, 20:10
najong lo melon...foto siapa tuch yg lo taro di avatarnya? dapet dare mane nih? lo tau2an dare mane ttg final fantsay?
by the way..poem lo dramatik amat alias bagus...hehe tetaplah menulis!!
lonely_girl
October 03, 2003, 20:12
Originally posted by anak_chambers
Yah tanggung Mel..... lanjutin donk..... :D
tunggu nich lagi diketik :hehe
Viscount
October 03, 2003, 20:24
wah jago ngarang ya
karangin cerita ttg gue dong mel
lonely_girl
October 03, 2003, 20:26
makaseh yach buat anak_chambers , risca , dan viscount yg dah mao baca cerpen gw ::bahagia:
Viscount
October 03, 2003, 20:31
bagus koq melllllll
:bravo:
DWibowo1.
October 03, 2003, 20:50
Originally posted by lonely_girl
makaseh yach buat anak_chambers , risca , dan viscount yg dah mao baca cerpen gw ::bahagia:
Iye, tapi cepetan lanjutannya :D Pembaca ngga sabar nech :p
lonely_girl
October 03, 2003, 21:04
nich lanjutannya :hehe
lonely_girl
October 03, 2003, 21:06
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DWibowo1.
October 03, 2003, 21:12
::up:: Lalu...lalu? :haha
bofh
October 03, 2003, 22:16
hum.. bagus2.. kirim ke email gue dunkz... sam@bandung.com ok??
lonely_girl
October 03, 2003, 22:28
oke dech ntar gw kirim yach :)
makaseh dah mao baca :D
-jo-
October 04, 2003, 00:13
Jimmy najiezz... mulutnya doank manis, otaknya bolong. :marah:
DWibowo1.
October 04, 2003, 01:13
Iye tuch... memalukan kaum cowo aje :o
Viscount
October 04, 2003, 01:28
itu kan co bule
co indo ga kaya gitu deh
lonely_girl
October 04, 2003, 01:41
vis , itu cowo indo :angel:
Viscount
October 04, 2003, 01:42
co indo koq ngomong inggris sih? :hmmm:
lonely_girl
October 04, 2003, 01:44
namanya juga cerpen :kakaka:
Viscount
October 04, 2003, 01:50
:kakaka: abis les inggris yah ceritanya
lonely_girl
October 04, 2003, 02:20
iya :kakaka:
Viscount
October 04, 2003, 02:35
mmm
minta cerita 'aku kurus skrg' dong :D
Ma®™
October 04, 2003, 02:36
[nunjuk] :kakaka: gua demen banget ma ni icon!
“Lo tau gak knapa gw gak kaseh mawar beneran . Knapa bukannya mawar palsu aja . “
Iya yach . Gw pun langsung sadar . Kok dia ngaseh mawar asli yach bukannya palsu . Kan klo asli gampang layunya .
Gua rada bingung nih.. Si Jimmy ngasi mawar beneran kan? kQ dia malah bilanQ knapa dia ga ngasi mawar beneran? Eh taunya dia koQ ngasi mawar beneran, gua yg lemoD pa gimana sih ;D
Viscount
October 04, 2003, 02:42
lagi ngantuk dia
lonely_girl
October 04, 2003, 14:25
Originally posted by ¨°Ma®«ea»¬H°¨
[nunjuk] :kakaka: gua demen banget ma ni icon!
Gua rada bingung nih.. Si Jimmy ngasi mawar beneran kan? kQ dia malah bilanQ knapa dia ga ngasi mawar beneran? Eh taunya dia koQ ngasi mawar beneran, gua yg lemoD pa gimana sih ;D
sorry :maaf:
gw salah ketik :lol:
udah gw edit tuch :D
-jo-
October 04, 2003, 20:06
wakzz... kirain dah dilanjoetin...:toktok:
Ma®™
October 05, 2003, 01:24
:haha ternyata lo yang lemoD, untung-2 :kakaka:
lonely_girl
October 05, 2003, 03:02
Originally posted by viscount
mmm
minta cerita 'aku kurus skrg' dong :D
tau dari mana lo ? :bingung:
lonely_girl
October 05, 2003, 03:03
Originally posted by ¨°Ma®«ea»¬H°¨
:haha ternyata lo yang lemoD, untung-2 :kakaka:
:maaf: yach
namanya juga baru pertama kali bikin cerpen :hehe
cerpen gw bagus gak ? :(
Viscount
October 05, 2003, 04:48
masa pertama kali?
mau 'aku kurus sekarang' dongggggggggggggg
-jo-
October 05, 2003, 14:54
Originally posted by ¨°Ma®«ea»¬H°¨
:haha ternyata lo yang lemoD, untung-2 :kakaka:
dasar loe ::bash::
::malu::
DWibowo1.
October 06, 2003, 05:05
Mel... lanjutin donk... mana sambungannya :D Ntar klo loe dah selesai giliran gwe :p
Ma®™
October 06, 2003, 10:15
Lo org pada ngomongin apa sih gua ga ngerti ;D
-jo-: kQ gua dasar??? Dasar-2 apa nih gua?? :haha
delfira_daffa
October 07, 2003, 08:22
Originally posted by lonely_girl
:maaf: yach
namanya juga baru pertama kali bikin cerpen :hehe
cerpen gw bagus gak ? :(
Cerpen lo baguss koQ lonely ;)
delfira_daffa
October 07, 2003, 08:24
Mana ::mad2:: mana lanjutannya ::mad2::
::mad2:: ::mad2:: ::mad2::
[bisik]ngikutan gaya mosting si lonely_girl di thread gw :kakaka:
-jo-
October 07, 2003, 17:19
lama kaliii lanjutannya...:guns:
capur_tulis
October 07, 2003, 17:37
wah baru baca gue...
mantep2...:bravo:
lanjutkan lageh yah....:hehe
cancer_gal
October 08, 2003, 00:58
Hihihi...ngikutin capur tuh...gue juga baru baca..terusin ya, lonely_girl...gue jadi bener2 penasaraan nih...ehm...apakah nantinya Jimmy muncul lagi??? Kalo muncul lagi...tonjok aja!
viechien
October 08, 2003, 08:11
lanjuttttttt donk
lonely_girl
October 08, 2003, 20:19
makaseh yach udah mao baca ::bahagia:
lonely_girl
October 08, 2003, 20:21
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lonely_girl
October 08, 2003, 22:54
Originally posted by delfira_daffa
Mana ::mad2:: mana lanjutannya ::mad2::
::mad2:: ::mad2:: ::mad2::
[bisik]ngikutan gaya mosting si lonely_girl di thread gw :kakaka:
balaes dendam yach ? :kakaka:
princess
October 09, 2003, 09:56
gua baru baca nih cerita...ternyata bagus!! :D :D Serius...tapi sayang lanjutannya kok lama.....Jangan lama2 ya, girl...
Si vania ngapain ngubek2 tong sampah lagi? Gua jadi dia sih gua bakar tuh bunga, terus abu-nya gua sumpelin ke mulut tuh cowo! :hehe
lonely_girl
October 09, 2003, 20:13
makaseh yg udah mao baca cerpen LG ::bahagia:
DWibowo1.
October 10, 2003, 00:32
Edit.... :hehe
lonely_girl
October 10, 2003, 00:40
yg di atas gw mao nyari GP yach ? :hehe
aroraha
October 10, 2003, 00:40
Originally posted by viscount
co indo koq ngomong inggris sih? :hmmm:
abis kursus english kale ::haha::
aku jawab ngawur ajah.
hello semuanya, met kenal yah ama aroraha ::waves::
DWibowo1.
October 10, 2003, 00:41
Originally posted by lonely_girl
yg di atas gw mao nyari GP yach ? :hehe
Iye :p
princess
October 10, 2003, 02:49
lanjutannya kok belom? :hehe
viechien
October 10, 2003, 05:41
lho mana lanjutanny
aphrodite_zhou
October 10, 2003, 14:54
gue baru aja baca... bagus2!!!
gue suka cara tulis elo... lanjoeeeeeeddd...!!!
lonely_girl
October 10, 2003, 21:05
makasih yach ::bahagia:
ada kritik gak ? :bingung:
lonely_girl
October 11, 2003, 00:33
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dragz
October 11, 2003, 03:46
ah, gw jadi malu nih ::malu::..
shella
October 11, 2003, 03:51
buset... GR banget loe tul :kakaka:
dragz
October 11, 2003, 03:52
ah.. gak kok :haha
shella
October 11, 2003, 04:11
kok kenapa jadi malu? :haha emang loe kira LG cerita ttg loe ya? :kakaka:
dragz
October 11, 2003, 04:14
nama asli gw kan jimmy :kakaka:
shella
October 11, 2003, 04:24
dicerpen gue loe bilang nama asli loe Tyo... gimana sih? :kakaka:
dragz
October 11, 2003, 04:25
dua2nya benar, jadi jawabannya adalah C :haha
shella
October 11, 2003, 04:37
kalo jawabannya D "Semua jawaban salah" ya :kakaka:
dragz
October 11, 2003, 04:44
gak ada jawaban D :haha
princess
October 11, 2003, 05:04
lanjutannya dikiiiitttt amaatttt....
BTW, gua punya pengalaman ama yang namanya Jimmy. Semuanya brengsek! HAHAHA! Gak tau napa, gua ada 2 temen yang naksir/ditaksir ama 2 cowo tapi namanya sama2 Jimmy. HAHA..... playboy amat....tukang maenin cewe dua-duanya.
cancer_gal
October 11, 2003, 15:54
Hmm...orang2 yang namanya 'Jimmy' lagi di hujat nih...tenang princess...
Terusin ya lonely_girl...
Ngga ada critic kok....cuman...hmmm....agak panjang ya lanjutannya!!! Hehehehehehe...*cancer_gal bawel*
lonely_girl
October 11, 2003, 19:25
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DWibowo1.
October 11, 2003, 19:46
wah...wah udah semakin seru nech :) Terusin donk :)
princess
October 12, 2003, 03:25
udah...pelok aja yang erat........... :hehe
aphrodite_zhou
October 12, 2003, 14:02
whooooaaaawww.... gue lon nemu co yg kaya gitu tuh... hiekz.. too bad klo si ce ini (lupa namanya sapa) ga suka ma anton! huh..
aphrodite_zhou
October 12, 2003, 14:12
klo gue pernah kenal ma co namanya jimmy itu... waktu skul.. anaknya ga brengsek ato playboy ko! malah kocaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaakkkkk buanget! doi tuh anak ambon asli!!! (geli gak seh, ambon namanya jimmy) item n rambutnya keriting sejati! huaahahhahahaa... bisa diselipin ama pensil (gak jatoh) pokonya tu anak jadi sasaran ledekan deh! katanya tu rambut bisa buat nilep barang.. hehehhe... gue ma dia emang tiap hari berantem mulut mulu.. dulu qta abis balik dr studitour naik bis malem2, yg keliatan asli CUMA mata n giginya doang! huahahahha... :kakaka:
dah ah... ko jadi cerita masa lalu.. jadi kangen neh ma dia.. heheh..
cancer_gal
October 13, 2003, 03:19
TERUZ!!!!! Bagus2
princess
October 13, 2003, 09:26
Originally posted by aphrodite_zhou
klo gue pernah kenal ma co namanya jimmy itu... waktu skul.. anaknya ga brengsek ato playboy ko! malah kocaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaakkkkk buanget! doi tuh anak ambon asli!!! (geli gak seh, ambon namanya jimmy) item n rambutnya keriting sejati! huaahahhahahaa... bisa diselipin ama pensil (gak jatoh) pokonya tu anak jadi sasaran ledekan deh! katanya tu rambut bisa buat nilep barang.. hehehhe... gue ma dia emang tiap hari berantem mulut mulu.. dulu qta abis balik dr studitour naik bis malem2, yg keliatan asli CUMA mata n giginya doang! huahahahha... :kakaka:
dah ah... ko jadi cerita masa lalu.. jadi kangen neh ma dia.. heheh..
Jimmy yang pernah gua temui semuanya ganteng2! Suer.. Pokoknya cakep semua. Ada salah satu Jimmy yang malah mirip ama Vic Chou (tapi cakepan dia drpd Vic!). Cuma playboy semua.... :P
Viscount
October 19, 2003, 03:24
eh iya ampir semua yg namanya jimmy playboy :D kalau depannya J jelek2 deh, dah kodrat kali :kabur:
meli, aku kurus sekarang mana?
princess
October 19, 2003, 08:10
mana lanjutannyaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ma®™
October 19, 2003, 08:49
Uwalaaaaa lanjoeDin dunkkk!!!! ;D
aphrodite_zhou
October 19, 2003, 14:50
ooii.. mana lanjutannya neh???
lonely_girl
October 23, 2003, 00:23
sorry yach lanjutannya lama :hehe
nich gw lanjutin dech :)
lonely_girl
October 23, 2003, 00:23
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Viscount
October 23, 2003, 00:27
itu yg atas sambungan baru yah? koq kayanya udah baca sih
lonely_girl
October 23, 2003, 00:29
hah :shock: baca di mana ? :bingung:
itu sambungan cerita sebelomnya :hehe
Ma®™
October 23, 2003, 00:55
LG!! [timpuk]
Lanjutannya jgn kelamaan dunkkkkk :(
DWibowo1.
October 23, 2003, 02:26
lalu, diterima ga itu lamaran? :D
lonely_girl
October 31, 2003, 21:27
:maaf: yach
dalam waktu deket ini , gw blom bisa lanjutin cerpennya :maaf:
lagi banyak tugas soalnya :(
lonely_girl
November 01, 2003, 02:17
Originally posted by anak_chambers
lalu, diterima ga itu lamaran? :D
menurut lo gimana ? ::mikir::
lonely_girl
November 01, 2003, 02:18
ini dech gw lanjutin lagi :D
soalnya tugas gw dah selesei neh :hehe
selamet baca yach ! ::cheer::
lonely_girl
November 01, 2003, 02:19
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lonely_girl
November 01, 2003, 02:20
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lonely_girl
November 01, 2003, 02:20
segetu dulu yach :hehe
dragz
November 01, 2003, 03:16
wah, komentar apa ya ? :bingung:
bagus kok LG ::cups::
DWibowo1.
November 01, 2003, 03:39
Originally posted by lonely_girl
menurut lo gimana ? ::mikir::
ga tau... khan loe yg bikin :o :haha
lonely_girl
November 02, 2003, 03:44
Originally posted by Zeratul
wah, komentar apa ya ? :bingung:
bagus kok LG ::cups::
makaseh ya yayang atul ::cups::
lonely_girl
November 02, 2003, 03:44
Originally posted by anak_chambers
ga tau... khan loe yg bikin :o :haha
masa gak bisa nebak seh :o
DWibowo1.
November 03, 2003, 00:43
Bisa :o ;)
shella
November 03, 2003, 06:10
kok blm dilanjutin L?
lonely_girl
November 03, 2003, 20:08
Originally posted by anak_chambers
Bisa :o ;)
apaan ? :o
DWibowo1.
November 04, 2003, 02:35
Ngga ngerusak nech klo tebakan gwe ditulis disini? ;)
lonely_girl
November 04, 2003, 02:54
blagu bgt seh :o
DWibowo1.
November 04, 2003, 06:16
galak bener sech :haha
Ma®™
November 04, 2003, 09:29
Lama banget seh ;D
aphrodite_zhou
November 04, 2003, 10:11
heuahuehaueha... klo atul nda mau ngomong disini.. daku sadja yg ngomong.. setoedjoe nda?
tu ce mo nolak anton lageee.. ya ga, lg`?
Ma®™
November 05, 2003, 00:00
Di terima sih gua bilanQ ;D
lonely_girl
November 05, 2003, 00:02
ayo tebak2 ::cheer::
DWibowo1.
November 05, 2003, 00:03
iya, kayanya diterima nech, Biar bahagia akhirnya :)
Ma®™
November 05, 2003, 07:08
[timpuk] LG
Viscount
November 05, 2003, 11:01
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:kakaka:
lonely_girl
November 05, 2003, 21:32
Originally posted by ¨°Ma®«ea»¬H°¨
[timpuk] LG
napa seh ? :hmmm:
demen bgt nimpukin org :mad:
ntar gak gw temenin neh :kakaka:
Ma®™
November 06, 2003, 00:37
Hikss jangan dunk :( Bis lo ga lanjoeDin sih jadi gua [timpuk] ajah ;D
lonely_girl
November 06, 2003, 02:42
sabar dunks say :kakaka:
DWibowo1.
November 07, 2003, 20:21
Mana Lanjutannya? :D
capur_tulis
November 07, 2003, 22:03
udeh gue baca lageh tu Lg...:D
lanjutin lageh yah....
menarik ko ceritanya....:)
lonely_girl
November 08, 2003, 16:35
makaseh yg dah mo baca ::v:: ::cheer::
karena kebaikan LG , gw lanjutin dech ceritanya :kakaka:
lonely_girl
November 08, 2003, 16:37
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aphrodite_zhou
November 08, 2003, 17:42
haiyaaaaaaahhh... ternyataaa...
lonely_girl
November 08, 2003, 21:12
ternyata knapa ? ::bingung::
capur_tulis
November 08, 2003, 21:25
wahh...
si anton malu2 neh.....
maju trusss pantang mundur....;D
LG....
lanjutttt....
aphrodite_zhou
November 09, 2003, 14:25
kaga2... ga napa2.. udah lanjooooeeettt...
DWibowo1.
November 09, 2003, 14:59
Wah bagus2... :bravo: Itu endingnya ato masih ada lanjutnya? :)
lonely_girl
November 09, 2003, 18:02
maseh ada lanjutannya kok :hehe
DWibowo1.
November 10, 2003, 01:00
Ooow masih, ya udah. Yg semangat bikin lanjutannya yach ::cheer::
lonely_girl
November 10, 2003, 02:46
neh lanjutannya lage :hehe
lonely_girl
November 10, 2003, 02:46
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lonely_girl
November 10, 2003, 02:47
kok gak ada yg baac cerpen gw seh ::cry::
olddigger
November 10, 2003, 02:54
Nah ini gw baru baca..:D:D bagus..& menarik..jadi lanjutannya gimana nih?:D:D:D
lonely_girl
November 10, 2003, 02:59
eh ada olddigger ::cups::
makaseh dah mo baca :)
olddigger
November 10, 2003, 06:46
Nyante aja lonely_girl...:D:D olddigger ::cups:: balik lonely_girl..:):P
Ma®™
November 11, 2003, 01:14
Waaaa lanjoeDannya dikiD :(
uM.. anaQ baru yah? Sapa yaaa?!?!? AWAS YAH KALO AMPE ENDINGNYA DIA BALIK LAGI KE COWO BRENGSEK ITU *ngancem.com
lonely_girl
November 11, 2003, 01:20
Originally posted by olddigger
Nyante aja lonely_girl...:D:D olddigger ::cups:: balik lonely_girl..:):P
ini ngambil kesempatan dalam kesempitan yach :o :hehe
lonely_girl
November 11, 2003, 01:20
Originally posted by ¨°Ma®«ea»¬H°¨
Waaaa lanjoeDannya dikiD :(
uM.. anaQ baru yah? Sapa yaaa?!?!? AWAS YAH KALO AMPE ENDINGNYA DIA BALIK LAGI KE COWO BRENGSEK ITU *ngancem.com
komentar aja neh :toktok: :kakaka:
Ma®™
November 11, 2003, 01:31
Aih tadi suruh kasi comment bagus, gua da comment malah digituin [timpuk] LG
lonely_girl
November 11, 2003, 02:00
maap dech non :hehe
lonely_girl
November 11, 2003, 02:01
cerpen ini gw buat untuk mareah yg cerewet :hehe
mareah :toktok:
lonely_girl
November 11, 2003, 02:02
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lonely_girl
November 11, 2003, 02:02
tuch mar dah selese :toktok:
ntar lanjutannya menyusul :o :hehe
olddigger
November 11, 2003, 02:04
Originally posted by lonely_girl
ini ngambil kesempatan dalam kesempitan yach :o :hehe
Weleh..kan cuman sekedar friendly gesture tuh..:D:P
olddigger
November 11, 2003, 02:06
Wah ada new comer nih..Alex Del Piero yah?:hehe :hehe
Ma®™
November 11, 2003, 02:07
Yahh masi dikiD :haha
lonely_girl
November 11, 2003, 02:09
bawel neh sich Mar :toktok:
Ma®™
November 11, 2003, 02:13
*diem.com
lonely_girl
November 11, 2003, 02:33
knapa kok lo diem ? :kakaka:
DWibowo1.
November 11, 2003, 04:15
ini si vania playgirl yach? :D
dragz
November 11, 2003, 12:25
awal perjumpaan kita ya say ? :haha
lonely_girl
November 11, 2003, 16:52
Originally posted by anak_chambers
ini si vania playgirl yach? :D
gak dunks :o
klo dia playgirl masa udah 2 taon maseh blom bisa ngelupain jimmy :toktok:
lonely_girl
November 11, 2003, 16:52
Originally posted by Zeratul
awal perjumpaan kita ya say ? :haha
kayaknya seh iya :kakaka:
capur_tulis
November 11, 2003, 19:13
kok bisa tuh anak baru jadi ketua Osis....:shock:
ayo LG lanjutkan lageh....:toktok:
lonely_girl
November 12, 2003, 01:06
lo salah sangka captul :kakaka:
yg ketua OSIS kan vania bukan anak baru :o
Ma®™
November 12, 2003, 02:47
Mana lagi?
DWibowo1.
November 12, 2003, 04:37
Originally posted by ¨°Ma®«ea»¬H°¨
Mana lagi?
Hehehe... kaya buah mangga aja :hehe
Ma®™
November 12, 2003, 06:02
Pa hubungannya? ;D
Green Star
November 19, 2003, 18:06
jgn2 si alex itu wakil ketua OSIS yah ? :D
ayooo terusin yg banyak donk lonely girl :D
DWibowo1.
November 20, 2003, 15:49
lanjutannya mana nech? :p
capur_tulis
November 20, 2003, 20:15
weleh2...
si LG lupa ngelanjutin nih cerpen...
apa die stuck ga ada ide lage yah....::mikir::
bintangbintang
November 20, 2003, 20:38
hi lonely_girl!!! ayuk dong, ayuk, dilanjutin. udah jamuran nih, daku menanti.
lonely_girl
November 27, 2003, 18:45
Originally posted by capur_tulis
weleh2...
si LG lupa ngelanjutin nih cerpen...
apa die stuck ga ada ide lage yah....::mikir::
tiba2 gw jade gak punya ide neh ::cry::
bantuin gw dunks ::cry::
lonely_girl
December 06, 2003, 22:42
cerpennya gw lanjutin lagi dech :hehe
mumpung lagi ada ide neh ::cool::
baca lagi yach :kakaka:
lonely_girl
December 06, 2003, 22:43
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lonely_girl
December 06, 2003, 22:44
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lonely_girl
December 06, 2003, 22:45
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capur_tulis
December 06, 2003, 23:07
wah gue jadi lupa lage neh jalan ceritanya....:kakaka:
masa gue harus baca dari ulang lageh....;D
lonely_girl
December 06, 2003, 23:24
baca aja lagi :kakaka:
masa engkau tidak mao meluangkan sedikit waktumu unutk membaca ulang cerpen gw lagi ::cry::
lonely_girl
December 06, 2003, 23:24
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lonely_girl
December 06, 2003, 23:25
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lonely_girl
December 06, 2003, 23:26
segini dulu yach :D
awas yach klo maseh ada yg protes :mad2:
DWibowo1.
December 07, 2003, 02:08
Jimmy knapa bisa di rumah sakit? :D
lonely_girl
December 07, 2003, 03:34
rahasia perusahaan dunks :o
capur_tulis
December 07, 2003, 13:36
lah2....
Jimmy kok di rumah sakit....
lo salah nulis yah LG.....:kakaka:
lonely_girl
December 07, 2003, 23:51
gak kok :o
jimmy emang masup rumah sakit :)
ntar dech gw kasitau knapa die bisa masup rumah sakit :o
DWibowo1.
December 08, 2003, 03:19
Digebukin Vania yach? :D
thing``
December 08, 2003, 04:23
jee.e.. ceritanya gantung :toktok: LG
lonely_girl
December 09, 2003, 02:08
Originally posted by anak_chambers
Digebukin Vania yach? :D
gak mungkin donk :o
kan vania sayang ama jimmy ::cups::
capur_tulis
December 09, 2003, 14:03
ayolah LG...
lanjutin lage...:toktok:
bisa2 ntar gue lupa jalan ceritanya...:P
lonely_girl
December 09, 2003, 23:09
kan lo bisa baca ulang lagi ::kakaka::
shella
December 10, 2003, 05:27
panjang juga cerita loe L, gue blm baca2 lagi nih lanjutannya :hehe
lonely_girl
December 11, 2003, 23:16
baca dunks shel :o
Marianne
December 13, 2003, 04:38
gua juga belum kelar2 bacanya :)
kristal
December 13, 2003, 06:06
ini cerita romantik ala LG yah :D hen hau ah :)
kenapa Jimmy ada di rumah sakit.......itu karena LG yang kepingin supaya Jimmy bertobat dari candu taruhannya :p bener gak ??? :D
eh Jimmy akhirnya mati gak ? :D
lonely_girl
December 15, 2003, 01:39
eh bu pres mampir juga ::bahagia::
Ma®™
December 15, 2003, 07:41
Originally posted by lonely_girl
Tiba2 Ella dateng .
“Knapa El ? “
“Gak gw dare tadi nyariin si Alex . Tapi gak ketemu2 . Ternyata ada di sini die . “
“Ehm..ehm.. Ternyata ada yg udah jadian yach . Kok gw blom denger beritanya neh . “
Tanpa kusadari muka Alex dan Ella pun memerah . Gw pengen ketawa ngakak ngeliatnya .
“Apaan sich Van . Sapa yg jadian . “
“Malu2 lo ama gw El . Kaya gw sapa aja ama lo . Ton , kok lo dare tade bengong aja seh . Ngomong dunks . Tade katanya lagi nyariin sich Ella . Pas orangnya dah dateng , malah gak ngomong sama sekali . “
“Rese lo Van . “
“Wakakkka . “
“El , knapa lo nyareen gw ? “ kali ini Anton yg ngomong .
“Gak cuma mo nanya doank . Ntar jadi kan perginya ? “
“Iya donk . “
“Oh ya udah . Gw cuma mo nanya gitu doank kok . “
Setelah berkata begitu , Ella pun pergi meninggalkan kita berdua .
“Van , ntar lo ikut pergi yach . “
“Apa lo bilang ? Gak salah denger gw ? Lo mao gw jadi nyamuk ? “
“PlZ . Ini penting bgt soalnya . “
“Ya elah Lex . Lo mo nge - date aja ngajakin gw segala . Tenang aja dech . Ella gak bakalan nyulik elo kok . Yg ada gw harusnya khawatir klo lo nyulik Ella . “
“Makanya itu . Lo harus ikut supaya gw gak bisa nyulik si Ella . “ katanya sambil mencoba merayuku .
“Tapi gw percaya kok ama lo . Lo gak bakalan nyulik si Ella . “ kataku sambil berusaha untuk mengembalikan kata2nya .
“Van , plZ . Ini penting bgt . Mau yach ? “
Akhirnya karna bujuk rayu Alex , mao gak mao pun gw ikut mereka berdua . Padahal gw tau nantinya gw bakalan jadi nyamuk .
Salah ketik tuh mustinya ALEX bukan ANTON ;D
lonely_girl
December 15, 2003, 20:39
oh iya yach ::malu::
thanx yach Mar atas koreksinya :)
Ma®™
December 16, 2003, 02:19
Akhirnya bisa jadi penyimak yg bae juga gua :kakaka:
lonely_girl
December 17, 2003, 02:17
mar ::toktok::
baru juga dipuji segeto , dah gede pala :kakaka:
Ma®™
December 17, 2003, 02:24
Yee bukannya d lanjoetin!
lonely_girl
December 17, 2003, 02:50
*diem.com* :kakaka:
moonlit
December 17, 2003, 03:11
set dah.. gwe baca kebanyakan komentarnya dibandingin ceritanya :D
tapi bagus niiy..
comon LG u can do it!! go! go!!
(translate: cepetan doong ceritanya..) :D
thing``
December 17, 2003, 03:12
:toktok: cepettt.. lanjoetttt...
capur_tulis
December 17, 2003, 13:19
wah LG ga dilanjutin....
katanya LG males ngetik....:o :kakaka:
Ma®™
December 18, 2003, 00:35
Ember banyakkan komen drpd cerita, d lanjutin kalo lagi mood, te op pe dah :P
lonely_girl
December 18, 2003, 02:29
::malu::
jgn gitu donk mar :o
kan gw jade gak enak ati neh :kakaka:
mar , ngomong2 mana vocabularynya :bingung:
gak usah semua juga gpp kok :o
gw kan cuma becanda :hehe
DWibowo1.
December 18, 2003, 04:05
Originally posted by capur_tulis
wah LG ga dilanjutin....
katanya LG males ngetik....:o :kakaka:
cap_tul baru tau yach klo LG pemalas? :kakaka:
lonely_girl
December 18, 2003, 22:54
anak_chambers :toktok:
jgn bikin gosip yach :o
Ma®™
December 19, 2003, 00:29
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh mana neeehhh?!?!?!
lonely_girl
December 19, 2003, 02:18
ahhh.....tunggu donk :hehe
Ma®™
December 20, 2003, 00:20
absen :o
lonely_girl
December 20, 2003, 01:39
absen juga :hehe
DWibowo1.
December 20, 2003, 01:41
Parah nech... yg punya cerpen aja malah OT :p
Ma®™
December 20, 2003, 01:48
Cerpen lo mana ga d lanjutin ;D
DWibowo1.
December 20, 2003, 01:55
Ayo LG, lanjut2 ::cheer::
lonely_girl
December 20, 2003, 02:33
gw rada bingung neh ama endingnya :bingung:
menurut pembaca , endingnya mo yg sedih ato romantis :bingung:
soalnya gw kebanyakan ide neh :hehe
Ma®™
December 20, 2003, 02:40
Yah gua mah apa aja jadi deh
DWibowo1.
December 20, 2003, 02:46
Originally posted by lonely_girl
gw rada bingung neh ama endingnya :bingung:
menurut pembaca , endingnya mo yg sedih ato romantis :bingung:
soalnya gw kebanyakan ide neh :hehe
Yg gantung aja :D
Ma®™
December 20, 2003, 02:49
Nah itu juga bole :o
Kaya cerpen gua :kakaka:
ANAK_CHAMBERS cerpen lo manaaaa hiks hiks
DWibowo1.
December 20, 2003, 02:56
sabar sabar.... :p
capur_tulis
December 20, 2003, 20:57
aduuhhh LG...:toktok:
lanjutkanlah nakk....:hehe
lonely_girl
December 21, 2003, 04:29
aduh para pembaca setia gw :hehe
udah pada menanti karya gw yach :kakaka:
oke dech ini lanjutan untuk para pembaca setia gw :kakaka:
lonely_girl
December 21, 2003, 04:29
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DWibowo1.
December 21, 2003, 04:39
lanjut.... :hehe
Ma®™
December 21, 2003, 23:34
Never judge ppl by its cover Lex, teriak Van dalam hati
:kakaka:
Dudul!
capur_tulis
December 21, 2003, 23:44
kurang banyak neh lanjutinnya.....:o
salah satu pembaca kecewa neh....;D
Ma®™
December 22, 2003, 00:41
tauQ noh :o
thing``
December 22, 2003, 09:41
:toktok: masakan cuman segetooooo :o
lonely_girl
December 22, 2003, 20:38
sabar..sabar..:o :hehe
capur_tulis
December 22, 2003, 23:18
gue ga bisa sabar...:o:haha
Ma®™
December 22, 2003, 23:36
orang sabar keluarnya lama kata LG :o
lonely_girl
December 23, 2003, 00:12
kapan gw pernah ngomong geto :o
mar :toktok:
Ma®™
December 23, 2003, 00:18
Males ngejunk lagi ah, comment kalo uda d lanjutin aje :o
;D
jinsbelel
December 23, 2003, 06:16
Originally posted by lonely_girl
ceritanya bagus gak ? :bingung:
kaseh kritik PlZ :angel:
bagus kok..:)
thing``
December 26, 2003, 02:43
:o LG..!!!! jangan kabur loe :toktok: lanjutin cepattt....:D
lonely_girl
December 26, 2003, 03:40
::maaf::
gw kan lagi liburan :o
jadi blom bisa lanjutin cerpen neh :hehe
Ma®™
December 26, 2003, 16:37
ah alesan lo :o
capur_tulis
December 26, 2003, 18:37
pembaca ngamuk....:o:kakaka:
lonely_girl
December 26, 2003, 21:21
::help::
serem gw byk bgt yg ngamuk :hehe
gw lanjutin dech buat mar ama captul yg cerewet :kakaka:
lonely_girl
December 26, 2003, 21:21
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capur_tulis
December 26, 2003, 21:36
akhirnya dilanjutin juga.....
apa ga kurang banyak???:P
lanjutkan lage LG......:hehe
lonely_girl
December 26, 2003, 21:49
lo bacanya cepet bgt seh :bingung: :hehe
gw lagi bikin cerpen lagi nich :hehe
makanya gw pengen cepet2 selesein nich cerpen :o:hehe
Ma®™
December 26, 2003, 22:54
Van, gua saying ma lo :kakaka:
Duh saking cepet ngetiknya, jadi ga enak ati :haha
thing``
December 27, 2003, 01:26
:o itu krn pas ngomongnya rada gementaran geto :D
Ma®™
December 27, 2003, 12:12
Gua lagi coba gayain nih, *ngakak* kocaQ ;D
Udah ah lo thing``, isenk aja :P
sabinadevil
December 27, 2003, 18:06
Ketinggalan gak sih gue.. Lonely_girl lanjut donk.. Bagus tuh ceritana.. inspirasi dari mana ne.. ato pengalaman pribadi ::brow::
hehe
Ma®™
December 27, 2003, 22:09
PENGALAMAN PRIBADI!!!
Setelah liat nick lo di msn gua tau :haha
lonely_girl
December 27, 2003, 22:10
Originally posted by Ma®™
Van, gua saying ma lo :kakaka:
Duh saking cepet ngetiknya, jadi ga enak ati :haha
itu lach klo lo nyuruh2 gw suruh bikin cepet2 :o
jadi gak bagus dech :o:hehe
lonely_girl
December 27, 2003, 22:11
Originally posted by sabinadevil
Ketinggalan gak sih gue.. Lonely_girl lanjut donk.. Bagus tuh ceritana.. inspirasi dari mana ne.. ato pengalaman pribadi ::brow::
hehe
ini bukannya pengalaman sich mareah :kakaka:
lonely_girl
December 27, 2003, 22:13
Originally posted by Ma®™
PENGALAMAN PRIBADI!!!
Setelah liat nick lo di msn gua tau :haha
mareah :toktok:
sok tau lo ah :o:hehe
[bisik]jgn bilang sapa2 donk[bisik] :kakaka:
Ma®™
December 27, 2003, 22:38
Gua cmen bilank ke sabina kQ LG :haha
capur_tulis
December 27, 2003, 22:48
ooohh... Statusnya si LG di MSN....
lage kehilangan sapah neh LG???:hehe
Ma®™
December 28, 2003, 06:34
Jimmy nya ngacir :o
lonely_girl
December 29, 2003, 00:42
Originally posted by Ma®™
Gua cmen bilank ke sabina kQ LG :haha
mareah :toktok:
buka2 rahasia gw aja neh :marah:
lonely_girl
December 29, 2003, 00:42
Originally posted by capur_tulis
ooohh... Statusnya si LG di MSN....
lage kehilangan sapah neh LG???:hehe
status lo juga sama kaya gw kan Tul :hehe
lonely_girl
December 29, 2003, 00:43
Originally posted by Ma®™
Jimmy nya ngacir :o
digoda ama si mar :kakaka:
Ma®™
December 29, 2003, 01:37
Eh ini bukan FORCEL, jgn OT molo euy [timpuk]
thing``
December 29, 2003, 04:32
:o LG ga OT cuman Ohh... Threeeeeeeee (OK) :P ... :hehe
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